Question

3．请介绍一节你曾经上过，也是你最喜欢的体育课，并说说你的理由．你的作文必须包括以下内容：（文中不能提及你的真实姓名和学校）简要介绍这节体育课的情况你喜欢这节课的理由．

Answer 1

分析 高分句型一：
That afternoon we had a P．E lesson，which I regarded as my favourite lesson．那天下午的课，是我最喜欢的课．
句型二：So every time I have difficulty in my study or life，that unforgettable lesson always reminds me how to persevere．因此每次我在学习或者生活上遇到困难的时候，那节让人难忘的课会提醒我该如何坚持下去．
句型一 which I regarded as my favourite lesson 该句是一个由which引导的非限制性定语从句，which在从句中充当宾语，替代前面出现的先行词 lesson
句型二 every time I have difficulty in my study or life..该句是一个由every time 这个名词短语充当连词的时间状语从句，且句子谓语部分使用了重要短语：have difficulty in doing sth 做某事有困难

解答 That afternoon we had a P．E lesson，which I regarded as my favourite lesson．（高分句型一）Our teacher taught us the long jump．When the bell rang，we gathered on the playground．After warming-up exercise，the teacher told us the way of long jump and showed us how to do it．Then we followed the teacher and practiced one after another．Soon came my turn，but I felt a bit nevous．Though I failed the first time，yet I didn't lose heart．I kept on practicing．At last I was able to jump over 2 meters．（介绍课程）
   From this lesson I came to see that one will succeed if he has perseverance．So every time I have difficulty in my study or life，that unforgettable lesson always reminds me how to persevere．（高分句型二）Then I would feel better and focus on my study again．（说明原因）

点评 该书面表达为提纲类，该类作文规定了考生的写作思路，考生在平时应注意积累相应的词汇和短语，在写作时运用准确的、简洁明了的语言将作文阐述清楚．