Question

10．假定你叫李华，你的美国笔友John来信告诉你他想在上海迪斯尼乐园（Disneyland）开放的第一天去参观．请你给他写封回信，要点如下：
1．诚挚邀请；
2．接机事宜；
3．住宿安排；
4．行程规划．
注意：1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头语和结尾语已为你写好．
Dear John，
I'm so pleased to receive your last letter．
                                     
I'm looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible．
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲类作文．根据题目要求可知用第一人称展开叙述，时态以一般将来时为主．内容包括四部分：一诚挚邀请；二接机事宜；三住宿安排；四 日程安排．
高分句型：
1．I suppose that（引导宾语从句） the Disneyland in Shanghai will attract thousands of visitors from home and abroad on its first opening day．
我认为，在开园第一天，上海迪士尼会吸引来自国内外数千个参观者．
2．So before your leaving for Shanghai（非谓语动词做状语），remember to tell me your flight number and the date，and （连接并列句）I will go to the airport to meet you personally
在你来上海之前，记住要告知我你的航班号和日期，我会亲自到机场接你．

解答 Dear John，
I'm so pleased to receive your last letter．You are welcome to come to my hometown and visit Shanghai Disneyland when it is first open to the public（诚挚邀请）．I suppose that the Disneyland in Shanghai will attract thousands of visitors from home and abroad on its first opening day（高分句型一）．So before your leaving for Shanghai，remember to tell me your flight number and the date，and I will go to the airport to meet you personally（高分句型二）（接机事宜）．I will put you up in my family，for both my parents want to chat with you．After arriving，you can have a good rest at my home（住宿安排）．Then I will show you around some places of interest in Shanghai．I have booked the tickets online in advance，so there is no hurry（日程安排）．
I'm looking forward to seeing you as soon as possible．
Yours，
Li Hua

点评 在写作时，要避免重复用词，所以我们要注意总结一下同义词和近义词，例如turn up=appear（出现）；support=raise （养活）．