Question

7．针对目前高中学生学习压力较大的现状，有人以"Effective Ways to Release the Stress"为题于上周调查采访了五个学校的500名高中学生．请你根据以下调查结果的图表写一份报告，并再谈谈自己或身边同学释放压力的有效方法．（字数150字左右）
参考词：心理咨询室the psychological consulting office


Effective Ways to Release the Stress
Nowadays more and more seniorschoolstudents are getting stressed in their studies．…
                               

Answer 1

分析 篇书面表达属于图画类作文，根据提示信息以"Effective Ways to Release the Stress"为题，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：分别从不同观点和理由两个方面来讨论该话题 2、图画是文章的总体框架，要在图画的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】根据图画将文章的要点概括完整，内容充实而丰富，结构紧凑，有层次感；要用词十分恰当，段落过渡自然．写出内涵意思，本文最大的特点就是想象力十分丰富，文章要有血有肉，无论是长短句的搭配，还是从句的使用，都要做到恰当，而且使用了多种表达：In order to以便，为了；as follows如下；for instance比如；Meanwhile同时；In this way以这种方式；In order to find out effective ways to release the stress，a survey was made last week in five schools．（高分句型）When I'm stressed，I usually do lots of weightlifting to get myself tired．（高分句型）

解答 Effective Ways to Release the Stress
    Nowadays more and more senior three students are getting stressed in their studies．In order to find out effective ways to release the stress，a survey was made last week in five schools．（高分句型）Altogether 500 students were interviewed，and some if interesting results were as follows：About thirty-five percent of the students let out their stress by doing sports．They play football，for instance．Meanwhile，another forty-five percent of them release their stress by listening to different kinds of music．Interestingly，the rest twenty percent of them usually get help from the school psychological consulting office．
    When I'm stressed，I usually do lots of weightlifting to get myself tired．（高分句型）Then I'll have a good sleep．In this way，I'll feel relaxed and forget all about my worries．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．