Question

某英语报举办以勤俭节约为主题的中学生英语写作大赛：要求参赛者根据以下四幅图内容，用英语描述发生在李华身上真实的故事并阐述其意义。

注意：1、文章的开头已给出，不计入总词数；

2、词数120左右。

参考词汇：节俭thrift

One day， Li Hua went shopping in a supermarket. At the checkout, he had to buy a shopping bag for what he had bought.

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Answer 1

One day， Li Hua went shopping in a supermarket. At the checkout, he had to buy a shopping bag for what he had bought. After he arrived home, it occurred to him that he could make a bg byy using a pair of his old trousers. Several hours later, he did make himself a very nice bag. When he showed it to his mother, she was amazed at what he had done and praised him a lot.

Personally, I think avoiding spending money on unnecessary things and making good use of old things in our daily life is a way of saving as well as an environment friendly behavior. What’s more, it is good and helpful for us to improve the ability of making things by hand, which not only bring us pleasure but also reduce waste around us. Therefore, I believe that thrift is a good virtue for every one of us Chinese to keep.

【解析】

试题分析：本文属于看图作文，讨论的主题是勤俭节约。写作时不要仅仅对要点进行生硬的翻译，而是要添加些内容，使文章看起来更充实，要组成一篇通顺连贯的短文。需要注意紧扣文章主题，给出的要点都需要包括，缺一不可。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要契合给出的开头，不能出现文章脱节问题。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。同时注意题目要求必须使用5个句子表达全部的内容。

【亮点说明】本文最大的亮点是文章的结构的组织，在第一段里作者主要是对图片教训描述，第二段发表的个人的观点。文章很和谐，是一个完整的整体。同时本文在连接词以及高级句式的使用上很有特色，如which not only bring us pleasure but also reduce waste around us.等等。

考点：考察图表类作文