Question

  短文改错（共10小题，每小题1分，满分10分）

假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（^）。并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（/）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1 每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

      2 只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不记分。

When I was in high school, most of my friend had bicycles. I hoped I could also have it. One day I saw a second-hand bicycle, that was only one hundred yuan. I asked my father the money. But he said he could only give me half of the money. He should find the other half myself. So I went to sell newspapers after the school. My father was pleased if I showed him the money a month after. He gives me the other fifty. You can imagine how much happy I was when I rode to school on my own bicycle.

Answer 1

1.friend---friends；Most of 决定了名词必须用复数形式。

2. it—one；it代替同一个，one指同类里边的一个，此处与前面提到的是一类。

3.that---which；非限制性定语从句的先行词指物时只能用which不能用that.

4.the money前加for；此处ask my father的目的是钱，the money需要加表目的的介词。

5.He----I；由前句he said he could only give me half of the money 和后句的myself可知.

6. 去掉after the school 中的the。

7.if---when；按照句意应该是一个月后，当我给他看钱的时候，可知此处应该用when。

8.after---later；此处用副词，不能用连词。

9.gives---gave；按照上下文叙述的都是发生地事情。

10.去掉happy前的much；此处how与happy之间不需要加任何词。