Question

假设你班将举行一次英语班会，主题为“中学生应该如何使用家长给的零花钱”。请你根据提示写一篇发言稿。

注意：
1. 词数：100左右；
2. 参考词汇：零花钱—pocket money
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Answer 1

不唯一
With the developing of our living standard, we get more and more pocket money given by our parents or relatives. But how should we spend it?
First of all, you can save it in the bank to cultivate a good habit of saving money. When you really need money you can take it out. Secondly, you can buy some book, on science or arts which bring more knowledge. Or, you are interested in stamp collecting, music or sports, you can spend your pocket money on it.
School students may make different choices on their pocket money. But never waste it just eating or playing electronic games.

解析试题分析：考生应不难理解写作要求和写作目的，演讲稿的格式已给出，这降低了写作难度。考生首先要仔细审题，包括以下几个方面：（1）层次结构（2）语气（3）内容要点。尤其是内容要点要把握准确到位，这是半开放性作文，要点需要考生拿捏准确以及正确，这加大了写作难度。再者考生要注意尽可能使句子的表达形式多样化，适当的使用一些高级句式和高级词汇，以提高书面表达的档次和可读性。
考点：提纲作文。
点评：作文要层次清晰，要点全面，表达流畅，切合作文要求，语气诚恳。文中使用一些极佳的词语和句子为文章增色，使用高级词汇及句型。