Question

8．假定你是李华．下面的图画描述了教师节那天你们班组织的一次活动，请根据写作药店并参考图画内容，为校刊"英语角"版面写一篇短文．
写作要点：
1．活动的策划； 2．教室的布置；
3．活动的内容； 4．你的感想．
注意：
1．短文词数不少于100；
2．开头部分已写好，不计入总词数；
3．可根据情况增减细节，详略得当；
4．不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．
class=mathjye-underline＞Ms．Li，our English teacher，must have found it strange on Teachers'Day； she did not receive a single greeting card from us students．She would have never thought a complete surprise was waiting for her．As Teachers'Day wasapproaching，our class decided to hold a party tocelebrate the important day for a change this year．On the afternoon of September 10，some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowersand balloons，and others went to buy cakes，drinks and fruits．Theblackboard was decorated with beautiful words，which read"HappyTeachers'Day!"
Entering the classroom，Ms．Li wassurprised to find we were standing in line，clappinghands and saying loudly"Happy Teachers'Day!"Wang Hua，our monitor，presentedher with the prepared flowers．Some of the girls sang songs for Ms．Li，and three boys showed their Gongfu talent．Before we left，we enjoyeda new English song by Ms．Li．
Ms．Li spent a wonderful time with us，but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all herhard work and guidance．．

Answer 1

分析 本文既是提纲作文又是图画作文，根据所提供的一幅图和所给要点信息描述教师节班级组织的一次活动．要点包括：活动的策划；教室的布置；活动的内容；你的感想．写作时以一般过去时为主．人称以第一人称和第三人称为主．重要短语：waitfor sb （等待某人），celebrate sth （庆祝…），was decorated with （用…装饰…），presented sb with sth（赠与，授予），spenda wonderful time（度过美好的时光），standin line （排队站着），clap hands（鼓掌）．

解答 Ms．Li，our Englishteacher，must have found it strange on Teachers'Day； she did not receive a single greeting card from usstudents．She would have never thought a completesurprise was waiting for her．（开头）
As Teachers'Day wasapproaching，our class decided to hold a party tocelebrate the important day for a change this year．（活动的策划）On the afternoon of September 10，some of us decorated our classroom with paper flowersand balloons，and others went to buy cakes，drinks and fruits．Theblackboard was decorated with beautiful words，which read"HappyTeachers'Day!"（教室的布置）
Entering the classroom，Ms．Li wassurprised to find we were standing in line，clappinghands and saying loudly"Happy Teachers'Day!"Wang Hua，our monitor，presentedher with the prepared flowers．Some of thegirls sang songs for Ms．Li，and three boys showed their Gongfu talent．Before we left，we enjoyeda new English song by Ms．Li．（活动的内容）
Ms．Li spent a wonderful time with us，but we know that we cannot thank her enough for all herhard work and guidance．（感想） 
All in all，every road leads to Roma，but Ibelieve hard work pays off．（结尾---总结概括）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点，并适当增加细节．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．