Question

5．在成长过程中，你会受到诸如家庭、学校、朋友、书籍、偶像等因素的影响．假如《二十一世纪英文报》举办了一个相关话题的征文，了解哪些因素对青少年的成长影响最大．请你写一篇征文，通过具体故事，介绍对你影响最大的一个因素，题目自拟．
注意：1．文章中不要出现自己真实的姓名或学校名．2．词数：100左右．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
After one is born，the first surroundings is the family in which he will grow up．
一个人出生后，第一个环境就是他将要成长的家庭．
高分句型二：
Family plays a significant role in shaping children's characters because it's children's most direct source of knowledge and experiences．
家庭在塑造孩子的性格方面起着重要的作用，因为它是孩子们最直接的知识和经验来源．

解答 As is known to us all，the process of growing up is complex for every person，for there are many influential factors in the growth of a person．As for me，what has affected me most is  family，the most important factors．
After one is born，the first surroundings is the family in which he will grow up（高分句型一）．Family plays a significant role in shaping children's characters because it's children's most direct source of knowledge and experiences（高分句型二）．Those who are brought up in good families tend to possess many pleasant characters and vice versa．
Looking back over the past ten years，I have the greatest impact to the people is my mother．My mother is no different from ordinary people，yet to me the most is her heart's normal mapping tolerance，understanding，open-minded and love it speechless．Mother's words，every move of my education，I learned tolerance，learned to understand and learn the extensive，learned to think for others．
Family offers me warmth and care．Therefore，it is the most influential in my growth．

点评 开放性作文给出一定的写作主题，并此为基础进行思维和联想，自由发挥．不仅考查学生在内容、结构安排、语言运用和组织方面的能力，而且对学生的想像力、发散思维、归纳判断能力也有很高的要求．