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6．假设你是李华，明年将要参加高考，对于专业选择与父母的意见各不相同，对此很困惑．请你根据一下提示，用英语给你的英国笔友David发一封邮件，谈谈关于你的专业选择问题．
1父母的想法；     2 你的意愿；    3 向David寻求建议．
要求：
1 词数100左右；可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
2 信的格式和开头已给出，不计入总词数．
Dear David，
I am at a loss nowadays because my parents have different opinions about choosing my major in college．
                                                          
Yours，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息明年将要参加高考，对于专业选择与父母的意见各不相同，对此很困惑．请你根据一下提示，用英语给你的英国笔友David发一封邮件，谈谈关于你的专业选择问题，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：父母的想法；你的意愿；向David寻求建议．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：at a loss茫然，不知所措；prepare  for为…做好准备；However然而；in great need of急需；Despite不管，不顾；be interested in对…感兴趣；make full use of充分利用；
My father thinks I should major in finance for the reason that he feels it will prepare me for a career in the world of business．（高分句型一）
However，my mother suggests me choosing law as my major because she thinks that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law so that I can find a good job after graduation．（高分句型二）
I know it would be a waste if I don't make full use of my talent for languages．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear David，
      I am at a loss nowadays because my parents have different opinions about choosing my major in college．
      My father thinks I should major in finance for the reason that he feels it will prepare me for a career in the world of business．（高分句型一）However，my mother suggests me choosing law as my major because she thinks that our society is in great need of skilled workers and experts in law so that I can find a good job after graduation．（高分句型二）（父母的想法）Despite their opinions，I want to learn a foreign language because languages are what I am interested in and good at．I know it would be a waste if I don't make full use of my talent for languages．（高分句型三）（自己的意愿）
     What should I do？I am looking forward to your advice．（向David寻求建议）
                                                                                                                                                                                                                   Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．