Question

【题目】请阅读下面文字及图表,并按照要求用英语写一篇 150 词左右的文章.

[写作内容]

1. 用约 30 个单词概述上述信息的主要内容;

2. 结合上述信息,简要分析导致交通问题的主要原因;

3. 根据你的分析,从社会规范(rules and regulations)和个人行为两方面谈谈你得到的启示(不少于两点)。

[写作要求]

1. 写作过程中不能直接引用原文语句;

2. 作文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称;

3. 不必写标题。

[评分标准]

内容完整,语言规范,语篇连贯,词数适当。

Answer 1

【答案】The traffic issue is a hard nut to crack. It not only affects our everyday life, but may also threaten people’s lives. The three selections presented above are typical examples.

Quite a few things give rise to the traffic problem. In spite of the large-scale construction of roads and highways, there is still much room for improvement, because of the ever increasing number of cars these years. What’ s worse, some drivers, cyclists and pedestrians do not think it vital to obey traffic rules.

In fact, traffic rules are part of the rules and regulations closely related to public order. Without them, people could not enjoy harmony or the country would be in chaos. But rules alone don’t secure an orderly society. It is the people who obey the rules that matter. It is everybody’s duty to observe them to keep our society in order and going on the right track. (150 words)

【解析】试题分析：今年江苏高考英语采用了“材料类+图形+提纲类”形式，综合考查考生阅读材料，识图和写作能力，较往年有所创新，也增加了难度。材料分为三部分：第一部分讲述了一位老奶奶阻止车辆停放引发的争议。第二部分讲述了行人和自行车不遵守红绿灯，导致交通事故发生的现象。第三部分是图表和文字，

反映近几年车辆的数量激增现象。要求第一段用30个单词概括材料内容；第二段分析导致交通问题的原因；第三段从社会规则和个人行为谈谈启示（不少于两点）。

【亮点说明】范文严格按照“三步走”的格局，第一段用短短26字（不含标点）概括了所给材料，得益于使用了“not only…but also…”这一经典句型；第二段分析了导致交通问题的原因，使用了“give rise to, large-scale construction of, the increasing number of, (be) vital to”等高级词汇，同时“what’s worse”衔接词的恰当使用使该段条理清晰。第三段句型多样，变换使用了“Without虚拟语气，it is…who…强调句型，it is one’s duty to do sth.”等句型，为文章增色不少。