Question

书面表达（共15分）
根据图画内容，以“We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter” 为题，用英语写一篇120-150词左右的短文。短文须包括以下要点，不得逐条翻译。

1、简单描述漫画的内容；
2、作业负担过重；
3、精讲精练；
4、参加体育锻炼和社会活动。
We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter
The picture shows______________________________________________________________

Answer 1

We Want Our Schoolbags Lighter
The picture shows that a girl is wearing a pair of glasses and carrying a big heavy schoolbag, and that a woman is doing some exercise. The girl says to the woman, “If you carry the schoolbag for me, I’m sure you will lose some weight.”
As is well-known, we Chinese students are overburdened with lessons and homework which our teachers have given us. All that we can do every day is to listen to our teachers’ lessons, to take notes and do our homework which seems endless.
We do hope that our teachers will help us get more knowledge with fewer lectures, exercises and less homework. Only in this way will we have spare time to do more physical exercise and make us stronger, and we will have more free time to take part in some social activities, which makes us all healthier mentally and physically.

试题分析：这是一篇看图写作，做题时：1. 认真读图，可知图画体现了学习过程中作业负担过重的问题，2. 初步构思，考虑用词、短语、句型和时态。3. 连词成句，然后再连句成文。尽可能地充分利用所学的短语或句型来表述具体的内容。4. 反复审核，修改错误。5. 注意所给的汉语提示。一般说来，看图写话中的汉语提示往往给定了有关的时间、地点、人物等相关的信息，还有参考词汇都是有用信息。
点评：在把握了文章的中心后，应在内心构思一个基本的框架，并考虑使用恰当的词语、短语和句型，以充分地表达文章的内容。这是体现自身能力的重要一环。然后再将各图的单个句子串连起来。串连时，要注意使用适当的连接词语或过渡性语句，不至于让读者觉得文章中出现跳跃现象，更使上下文更为紧凑、自然。