Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Bob被选中代表他们学校参加11月15日即在长沙举办的汉语桥，他不知道如何准备，向你征求建议，请你给他写封回信，给出你的建议并表达你的美好祝愿。

注意：字数110左右，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

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Yours,

Li Hua.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Bob,

I’m more than glad to hear that you were chosen to represent your school to participate in the Chinese Bridge to be held in Changsha on Nov.15. I’m writing to share with you my suggestions on how to prepare for it.

Above all, you’d better spend more time strengthening your ability to use Chinese, which is the most important quality to win. What’s more, it could be a good idea for you to surf the Internet for general introduction on China. Only by doing so can you gain basic information about China as much as possible within such a short time. Lastly, you’re supposed to sign up for programs to acquire some cultural skills such as paper cutting, singing songs and so on.

I do hope these tips can be helpful to you. Good luck with your competition.

Yours,

Li Hua

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