Question

18．作为高中学生，你肯定经历过多次考试，体验过成功，也遭遇过失败．请你根据下面的提示内容，简要概述高中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度，并结合自身实际，说明你的观点．

态度一	态度二	你的观点
当考试结果不如人意时，情绪低落，丧失信心，不再继续努力．	当考试失败时，分析并找出失败的原因，鼓励自己，增强自信，避免再犯同样的错误．	失败乃成功之母…

要求：1、词数：150左右；
  2、可根据内容要点适当增加细节，以使行文连贯．

Answer 1

分析 本文讨论高中学生中普遍存在的对考试失败的两种态度这个话题．根据题目要求可知用第一人称和一般现在时态．内容包括：一点明主题；二两种不同的态度；三自己的观点．
高分句型：
1．Some of us become low in spirits in face of failure，and even some  are so disappointed that they don't want to make further efforts in their studies．句子里become low in spirits 表示"情绪低落"； in face of 表示"面对"；so…that 表示"如此…以至于"；make further efforts 表示"做进一步的努力"．
当考试结果不如人意时，我们中的一些人情绪低落，甚至丧失信心，不再继续努力．
2．They spare no efforts in analyzing the cause of their failure and at the same time encourage themselves to become more confident so that they won't repeat their mistakes in their later examinations．句子里spare no efforts in 表示"尽全力做某事"； so that 表示"为了"．
他们尽力分析他们失败的原因，同时为了下次不再犯同样的错误，他们鼓励自己更有信心．

解答 As middle school students，we have all taken examinations of different types and experienced success as well as failure．Different students have different attitudes towards failure in the exams．（点明主题）
Some of us become low in spirits in face of failure，and even some  are so disappointed that they don't want to make further efforts in their studies．【高分句型一】As a result，their studies go from bad to worse as time goes on．Fortunately，some students take quite positive attitudes towards their setbacks．They spare no efforts in analyzing the cause of their failure and at the same time encourage themselves to become more confident so that they won't repeat their mistakes in their later examinations．【高分句型二】（两种不同的态度）
As far as I'm concerned，I believe that failure is the mother of success．So long as we can find out the root cause of our failure and step up our efforts to improve our ways of learning，we can surely make great progress and turn our dream into reality．（自己的观点）

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