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8．假设你叫李华，是我市第三中学高一学生．最近你听到了一个消息：自2014年起，山东省高考英语不再进行听力测试．请你用英语给《21世纪（英语）报》的编辑写一封信，谈谈你对这一变化的看法．
注意：1．词数120～150；
2．参考词汇：高考-the college entrance examination
Dear Editor，
                                                                                                                                           
Yours Sincerely，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 写好这类作文要注意几个步骤：1． 认真审题，找准提示语中的关键词或句，确定中心思想．2． 依据关键句，草拟提纲，梳理文章的脉络3． 准确定位人称、时态．注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次．4．最后还要认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等
高分句型一：
Most of us have one or several habits，like write English words while listening to English words so remember faster
我们大多数人都有一个或几个习惯，喜欢写英语单词，听英语单词以便快速记忆．
高分句型二：
but I can't give up English listening practice，to learn English is not only to write，read，more or to listen to English listening，so in order to learn English better，remember the words and sentences．
但我不能放弃英语的听力练习，学习英语不仅是写作，阅读，或听英语听力，所以为了更好地学习英语，要多记单词和句子．

解答 Dear Editor，
Most of us have one or several habits，like write English words while listening to English words so remember faster（高分句型一）．When he heard the news，I was very surprised，junior middle school examination and hearing test，did not think of the college entrance examination to exam，English exam difficulty is reduced，we study opportunities for more，but I can't give up English listening practice，to learn English is not only to write，read，more or to listen to English listening，so in order to learn English better，remember the words and sentences（高分句型二）．College entrance examination English listening test，I still can not give a good method to learn English，learn English hard．I hope you can pay attention to English listening to English，or have good results．
                                                                                                                  Yours Sincerely，
                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 本书面表达为议论文，议论文是对某现象或观点进行点评．写作时，应注意按提出、分析、解决问题的逻辑顺序来安排文章结构，使用足够的论据来分层次论证自己的观点．