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【题目】假如你是李华,下图描述的是你这个周六的活动,请你就此写一篇英语日记。

要求:1. 包括所有的要点,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。

2. 字数:120词左右。

Morning: cycle to raise money for disaster – hit areas

Afternoon: watch the film of Jiao Yulu

Evening: read The Diary of a Young Girl

December 27th Saturday Sunny

What a wonderful weekend!

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【答案】December 27th Saturday Sunny

What a wonderful weekend!

Today is Saturday. My friends Li Ming and I joined a team of cyclists along our city with the hope of raising money to help children in disaster-hit areas. Although tired, we were having a good time and collected about 5 thousand Yuan to give to the schools. In the afternoon, we went to see a film named Jiao Yulu. I was so moved by the hero in the film that I made up my mind to study harder in order to serve for the people better in the future. As usual, I spent about two hours reading The Diary of a Young Girl. The experience of the character attracted me much. “What a wonderful weekend!” I thought when I went to bed at 10 o’clock.

【解析】1.确定文章的体裁,本题所要求写的书面表达是日记,那么首先就需要知晓日记的写作特点。

2.确定文章时态的基调,确定文章时态的基调对于整个写作非常重要。它直接决定了不同句子使用的时态正确与否。这篇日记介绍当天发生过的事,应该以一般过去时为主

3.仔细阅读题目要求和文字提示,领会要写的文章的主题,确定文章的段落,写出各段的主题句。本题应该按照时间顺序Morning: cycle to raise money for disaster – hit areas;Afternoon: watch the film of Jiao Yulu;Evening: read The Diary of a Young Girl。这样确定文章的基本结构

4.尝试用高级词汇,使可读性增强。美化句子可以采用复合句和特殊的句型结构,也可以采用形式主语、形式宾语或简略句来实现。如:As usual,I spent about two hours reading The Diary of a Young Girl.

长难句解析

Although tired, we were having a good time and collected about 5 thousand Yuan to give to the schools.

although引导让步状语从句此处是一个省略的从句完整的从句应该是Although we were tired.主句由and连接were havingcollected两个谓语

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