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14．假设你是美国洛杉矶高中留学的中国学生，在"Our County's Culture"课上，鸟向全班同学及老师介绍中国的传统节日-----端午节．请你写一篇稿子，包括以下要点：
1．端午节的时间及起源（农历五月初五）；
2．端午节的习俗；
3．邀请大家在端午节那天一起包粽子．
注意：
1．词数100左右；
2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
3．开头已写好，不包含在字数内．
Dear class，
I am very honored to have the chance tointroduce to all of you a traditional Chinese festival-Dragon Boat Festival．（高分句型一）
The 5th day of the 5th lunar month is a traditional Chinese festival dedicated to the great poet Qu Yuan for his devotion to his native state in ancient China．（高分句型二）It is a celebration to whichevery family has attached great importance．People in many ways paytheir respectsto QuYuan such as eating zongzi，racing dragon boats and so on．（高分句型三）The festival was long marked as a cultural holiday in China．Now it is also celebrated as"Poets'Day"in honor of Qu Yuan，who is known as China's first poet．Most excitingly，we can enjoy a three-day holiday together with weekends．
Maybe you're curious to know something about zongzi．Just sit straight，and I will show you how to make it and we will enjoy the zongzi we make together next class!（高分句型四）
Thank all you guys，see you next time!．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息假设你是美国洛杉矶高中留学的中国学生，在"Our County's Culture"课上，鸟向全班同学及老师介绍中国的传统节日-----端午节．请你写一篇稿子，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：端午节的时间及起源（农历五月初五）；端午节的习俗；邀请大家在端午节那天一起包粽子．2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：be honoured to do很荣幸去做某事；in many ways在很多方面；and so on等等；be curious to do好奇的去做某事；
    I am very honored to have the chance to introduce to all of you a traditional Chinese festival-Dragon Boat Festival．（高分句型一）
   The 5th day of the 5th lunar month is a traditional Chinese festival dedicated to the great poet Qu Yuan for his devotion to his native state in ancient China．（高分句型二）
People in many ways pay their respects to Qu Yuan such as eating zongzi，racing dragon boats and so on．（高分句型三）
Just sit straight，and I will show you how to make it and we will enjoy the zongzi we make together next class!（高分句型四）

解答 Dear class，
        I am very honored to have the chance to introduce to all of you a traditional Chinese festival-Dragon Boat Festival．（高分句型一）
        The 5th day of the 5th lunar month is a traditional Chinese festival dedicated to the great poet Qu Yuan for his devotion to his native state in ancient China．（高分句型二）It is a celebration to which every family has attached great importance．People in many ways pay their respects to Qu Yuan such as eating zongzi，racing dragon boats and so on．（高分句型三）The festival was long marked as a cultural holiday in China．Now it is also celebrated as"Poets'Day"in honor of Qu Yuan，who is known as China's first poet．Most excitingly，we can enjoy a three-day holiday together with weekends．
        Maybe you're curious to know something about zongzi．Just sit straight，and I will show you how to make it and we will enjoy the zongzi we make together next class!（高分句型四）
        Thank all you guys，see you next time!

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．