Question

18．在生活中，人与人之间难免会发生不愉快的事情，其中有误会，有矛盾，有争吵…请就此写一篇英语短文．
主要内容包括：1）事情的经过及其处理；    2）你的感想．
注意：
1、词数不少于120个；
2、不能使用真实姓名和学校名称．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇提纲作文，让我们就"人与人之间难免会发生不愉快"写一篇作文，这需要我们发挥英语思维，将提供的信息用英语完整流畅的表达出来．写作需要用第三人称，时态主要是一般过去时，内容要点包括：事情的经过及其处理； 你的感想．我们此篇作文分为两部分，第一部分为事情的经过．第二部分为事情的处理过程．第三部分为作者的感想．
重点短语与句型：
turn into 负担…
To be honest 熬夜 
be to blame 另一方面
as a matter of fact充分利用
高分句型一：Hua and Li Jiang，who are good friends，bumped into each other，trying to catch the ball．此句用了who引导的定语从句以及现在分词trying作原因状语
高分句型二：It is also a virtue to forgive and forget，especially in such a competitive and stressful society此句用it 作形式主语，真正主语是后面的不定式．

解答 Conflicts with others are common in everyday life．During the basketball game yesterday afternoon，Su Hua and Li Jiang，who are good friends，bumped into each other，trying to catch the ball．（高分句型一）Then they started shouting and yelling，and it turned into a horrible quarrel．（事情的经过）
　　To be honest，it was Su's fault but Li was also to blame-they were not calm enough and both said some really mean things．They cared too much about winning and losing．As a matter of fact，blocking，pushing and bumping are just part of a tough game．Fortunately，after the head teacher's instruction，they forgave each other very soon and became good friends again．（事情的处理过程）
　　In my opinion，to avoid such conflicts，we should be kind to one another．It is also a virtue to forgive and forget，especially in such a competitive and stressful society．（高分句型二）Instead of blaming each other，we should communicate more and put ourselves in others'place．Don't be self-centered and try to be considerate．We must learn to handle conflicts calmly and wisely．（作者的感想）

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实 的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．