Question

 “世界读书日（每年的4月23日）”，假定你是李华，你的加拿大网友Peter成立一个网上“读书俱乐部”，邀请世界各地中学生参加。假定你对读书特感兴趣，希望加入该俱乐部，请用英文写一封自荐信，要点如下：

1．你对此事情的看法，并表达积极参加的愿望；

2．陈述自己的有利条件，如痴迷于读书，中英文阅读和写作能力强等；

3．若成为会员，会给其他会员提供更多帮助并使自己读更多的书。

注意：1．不要逐词逐句地翻译；

2．为使语句连贯，可以适当增加细节；

3．词数100左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总数。

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua. I’d like to join your “Reading Club” on the Internet. ……

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Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Peter,

I’m Li Hua. I’d like to join your “Reading Club” on the Internet. I think it will benefit all of the readers to share and enjoy more wonderful books. I really want to take an active part in the reading activity.

I am crazy about reading books, which I am sure, will appeal to the other members in your club. Besides, I can write some articles about what I have read both in English and Chinese, with which I can communicate well with other book-lovers.

If I can be part of your club, I will offer more help while making full use of the opportunity to read more.

Please consider my request, and I’m looking forward to your early reply.

Yours sincerely,

【解析】

试题分析：这是一篇提纲类作文，话题是“世界读书日“，要求用英文写一封自荐信，要点大部分已经给出，我们需要用正确的英语把给出的要点表达出来.本作文中给出的要点比较具体,故需要准确表达.写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。如范文中的I am crazy about reading books, which I am sure, will appeal to the other members in your club.这句话中有非限制性定语从句。

考点：提纲类作文

点评：本文属于提纲类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。