Question

5．你的堂兄Jayson 刚刚结束2016年高考（the College Entrance Examination），开始了为期两个多月的假期，请你按要求给他写封e-mail，为他的假期提出良好建议，让他的假期更有意义．词数100左右．为使文章连贯可以增添细节，开头已给出．
要点：1．学习一技之长（游泳，驾驶…） 2．出去旅游
3．陪伴父母                                        4．自己给出其他建议．

Answer 1

分析 这是一篇命题作文，为堂兄提出假期的建议，主要包括四个方面1．学习一技之长（游泳，驾驶…）； 2．出去旅游；3．陪伴父母；  4．自己给出其他建议．用一般现在时态和将来时，第一人称．
重要的短语和句型：
Congrtulations to you祝贺你
First and foremost首先
Last but not least最后但是不是最不重要的
it（形式主语） is a good idea to have a nice trip，which will help you to relax completely from  the long period of pressure caused by the exam（非限制性定语从句）．去旅行是个好主意，它有助于释放由考试造成的压力．
this is a good chance to keep them compay before you go to college．在你上大学之前，这是一个陪伴他们的好机会．

解答 Dear Jayson，
I am glad that you have finished the College Entrance Examination．Congrtulations to you．As for you holiday，here are some tips for you．（点题）
First and foremost，it is a good idea to have a nice trip，which will help you to relax completely from  the long period of pressure caused by the exam．（出去旅游）Second，you are supposed to make full use of this holiday to  learn some skills，such as swimming，driving，cooking and so on．（学习一技之长）All these skills will benefit you  a lot in your  life．Third，you were so busy with your study that you ignored your parents．Therefore，this is a good chance to keep them compay before you go to college（陪伴父母）．Last but not least，why not  visit your former teachers，who gave you much help（探望老师）．
       All above is my advice．I expect you will have a happy and meaningful holiday（祝福）．
                                                                                                         Yours
                                                                                                         LiHua

点评 考查提纲类作文．写作时，在文章的开头，即第一段，你要写写明写作目的，具体是要写什么内容．这一段的开始可以先引出事实，但最后一句要写一个Themes．，即主题，这篇文章的中心议题．