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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文,请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中

共有10处语言错误,每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加:在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧),并在其下面写出该加的词

删除:把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉

修改:在错的词下画一横线,并在该词下面写出修改后的词

注意:1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词2.只允许修改10处,多者(从第11处起)不计分

Dear Mr. Dyson,

I am interested in what you advertised the other day on the Internet. I would like to apply to become a assistant in your company.

I expect to graduate on Beijing University in 2019 and get a Master's degree in mechanical engineering. In the past few years, I had got experience in designing new projects and developed professionally competence in my subjects.

I worked in my holidays for a company where designed engines for jeeps. I helped them design several part of the new engine. It made me to think I would like to work in a real inventor's company. I understand that you have the qualifications and experience that you need for the personnel in your company. I would grateful if you could consider employ me in your company.

Yours sincerely,

Liu Xue

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【解析】

本文为申请信，主要介绍了自己的受教育情况，工作经历等。

第一处为冠词错误，assistant 为元音开头，因此用an， 不用a。

第二处为介词错误，毕业于用graduate from。

第三处为时态错误。In the past few years，提示时态用现在完成时。

第四处为形容词错误。修饰competence 这个名词用形容词professional，而不用副词。

第五处为定用从句连词的错误。Company 为先行词，从句缺少主语，所以用关系代词that/which。

第六处为名词单复数错误。前面有several修饰，所以用parts。

第七处为不定式错误。Make sb do sth，不能加to。

第八处为代词错误。我认为我有资格和经验。所以you 要改为I。

第九处为谓语错误。我将充满感激，would 后加be +形容词，构成系表结构，作谓语。

第十处为非谓语错误。Consider +doing.表示考虑干某事。