Question

16．请根据下面提示，写一篇短文．词数不少于50．
In your spoken English class，your teacher shows you the following picture．You are asked to describe the picture and explain how you understand it．

Answer 1

分析 本文为图画类作文．
写作主题可以为：坚持不懈，笑到最后/如何坚持跑完全程？
写作要点为：1，描述图画内容；2，个人看法．

解答 Possible Version 1
In the picture，along the tracks come three runners．The one who takes the lead wears a smile on his face，despite the great distance he has covered．The other two，with sweat streaming down their faces，are clearly tired from running．
What the picture tries to convey is that success belongs to those who can keep up a good state of mind faced with life challenges．The smile on the face of the runner in the lead suggests that he enjoys the race，regardless of the hard work he has to devote．This definitely makes him stand out among the other competitors，who wear serious and painted expressions on their faces．Life is sometimes like a race with tracks stretching long．A good state of mind can actually bring out our best．
 
Possible Version 2
In the picture，three boys are running along the tracks．The first boy is running with ease and confidence．The last boy falls far behind，but he is still going all out for the race，with his teeth clenched．
It dawns on me that whatever situation we find ourselves in，never should we lose hope but press ahead．Standing a slim chance of catching up with the other two ahead of him，the persistent boy in the last place shows no sign of giving up and works even harder．His perseverance demonstrates a profound meaning in life．It often happens that hard as we may try，our efforts do not yield satisfying results．However，as long as we persevere in our determination and efforts，we are the champion of our own life"race"．

点评 考生需根据图画信息，揭示图画中的道理，根据所提供信息提炼文章的写作主题，需了解写作要点及写作意图，仔细构思写作结构，平时注意积累词汇及语法知识．