Question

【题目】最近你校英语报做了一次关于"遇到困难找谁帮忙"的问卷调查,请根据以下信息，用英语为该报写一篇120词左右的短文， 简要分析调查结果，并发表自己的观点。短文的标题已为你写好。

调查对象：你校高中生

调查人数：200人

调查方式：访谈

调查结果：(见下图)

Whom Do You Turn to When in Trouble

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Answer 1

【答案】Whom Do You Turn to When in Trouble

Recently, the school English newspaper carried out a survey, concerning the topic whom students turn to when in trouble. With two hundreds senior high school students taking part, the survey results are as follows.

The majority of the students choose to share their trouble with their classmates or friends when in trouble, accounting for 53%. The reason is that the persons of the same age can put themselves in his or her shoes. Besides, there is no communication barrier. 28% of the students will turn to their teachers or parents, who have abundant experience and can be helpful. Surprisingly, 19% turn to nobody.

As far as I am concerned, we students are supposed to communicate with others frequently. Only in this way can we keep healthy mentally.

【解析】这是一篇图表类作文。要求考生介绍图表内容。首先，考生应明确调查对象，方式，人数，调查问题。其次，考生应根据图表介绍调查结果，即同学们的不同选择。另外，考生还要对此结果做出分析，发表自己的观点。在这部分中，考生应该注意要将图表内容介绍齐全，不要有所遗漏。该文章应用一般现在时态。

【亮点分析】所给范文内容齐全，要点明确，长短句交叉使用，表达自然得体。上下文连接自然，条理明确。适当使用不同句式：1. 同位语从句：whom students turn to when in trouble 2. with的复合结构With two hundreds senior high school students taking part 3. 非谓语动词accounting for 53% 4. 表语从句that the persons of the same age can put themselves in his or her shoes 5. 定语从句who have abundant experience and can be helpful 6. 倒装句Only in this way can we keep healthy mentally。