Question

【题目】你们学校“英语爱好者俱乐部”对“良好饮食习惯”这一话题进行了讨论。请根据下表中的内容提示, 用英语写一篇发言稿。

部分同学的饮食习惯	不吃早餐, 爱吃零食, 偏食, 饮食过量
良好的饮食习惯	饮食多样化, 饮食定时定量
个人看法	良好的饮食习惯很重要, 有助于身体健康

注意: 1. 词数120个左右;

2. 开头已为你写好, 内容可适当发挥, 注意行文连贯;

3. 参考词汇: 偏食be picky about food 零食snack 定时定量regularly and properly

Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’ s important for us to form healthy eating habits.

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As far as I’ m concerned, I think it is important to keep a healthy diet, which contributes to building up a strong body. Only in this way can we have enough energy for our study.

That’ s all. Thank you.

Answer 1

【答案】Dear friends,

As we all know, we are what we eat. Therefore, it’ s important for us to form healthy eating habits.

However, some students have formed a variety of bad eating habits, such as not having breakfast, loving eating snacks, being picky about food, eating and drinking too much and so on, which will surely do harm to their health. To keep healthy, we should have healthy diets. Not only should we have various food, like fish, meat, vegetables, fruit as well as rice, noodles, but also we should have food regularly and properly.

【解析】试题本文考查半开放性的议论文。讨论的话题是“良好饮食习惯”。写好这篇作文的关键是认真审题和分析所给的提示，认清写作要求和提纲之间的关系，然后确定文章的主题、文体、人称和时态。本文是一篇议论文，应以一般现在时为主，人称以一、三人称为主。接着根据所给提纲，列出要点，并以此为基础充分发挥自己的想象力，灵活运用英语知识，采用不同的表达方式将各要点完整地表述出来，注意主次分明，详略得当。切记写作时语言力求准确、简洁。同时应选用合适的连接词或过渡词，使文章具有一定的连贯性。最后不要忘记认真查验是否有漏写情况，有无拼写错误及标点误用等。

【范文亮点点评】

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