Question

【题目】文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（∧），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均限一词;

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

I once bought the beautiful bracelet from a store and felt excited when I tried it on. Sadly, I was soon disappointed at that my naughty kids broke it. But instead of just feel sad, I chose to repair it myself.

To my greatly surprise, it didn’t take a long time to do it. As time went by, I found that I was not happy with just repairing my breaking bracelets. I started making new bracelets out the materials from my old one. Later on, I begin to design on my own

Then I made my first deal. Back in 2013, I posted my bracelets on WeChat for the first time and several friends said that they wanted it. That was just the start. With much materials at hand, I made my designs into reality.

Answer 1

【答案】1. beautiful 前 the→a

2. disappointed 后 at 去掉

3. feel→feeling

4. greatly→great

5. breaking→broken

6. out 后加of

7. one→ones

8. begin→began

9. it→them

10. much→many

【解析】本文为记叙文。文章记叙了作者一个心爱的手镯弄坏了，于是她开始用旧手镯加工新的手镯，结果加工出来的手镯还很受欢迎。

第一处：beautiful前the改为a；考查冠词。此处表泛指“一个手镯”，应使用不定冠词。故 beautiful前the改为a。

第二处：disappointed后at去掉；考查句型。be+adj.+that从句。故disappointed后at去掉。

第三处：feel改为feeling；考查介词搭配。此处作of的宾语，应使用-ing分词。故feel改为feeling。

第四处：greatly改为great；考查形容词。此处修饰surprise，作定语，应使用形容词。故greatly改为great。

第五处：breaking改为broken；考查过去分词作定语。broken“坏了的”。故breaking改为broken。

第六处：out后加of；考查词组搭配。make sth. out of sth.表示“在某样原材料上雕刻加工获得新物品”。故out后加of。

第七处：one改为ones；考查代词的单复数。此处应指“我的那些旧手镯”，应使用复数代词。故one改为ones。

第八处：begin改为began；考查动词时态。此处描述的是过去的事情，应使用一般过去时。故begin改为began。

第九处：it改为them；考查代词的单复数。此处指代my bracelets，应使用复数代词。故it改为them。

第十处：much改为many；考查修饰量词。materials为可数名词的复数形式，many修饰可数名词，much修饰不可数名词。故much改为many。