Question

8．假如你是李华，从互联网上得知Banks夫妇的餐厅在登广告招聘兼职服务员．请写一封电子邮件应聘．主要内容包括：
1．发邮件的目的；2．自我介绍；3．应聘理由（至少两条理由）；4．表达自己的希望．
注意：1．词数100词左右；    2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；
 3．邮件开头结尾已为你写好，但不计入总词数．
Dear Mr．﹠Mrs．Banks，
I'm Li Hua，who has just graduated from high school this summer．        ．
Regards，
Li Hua．

Answer 1

分析 本文属于提纲作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题．平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果．
亮点句型一：Besides，I'm diligent and healthy with a nice character，which helps me get along well with people with different backgrounds．此外，我勤奋和健康与良好的性格，这有助于我与不同背景的人相处得很好．本句是一个非限制性定语从句，which指代整个主句的内容，在从句中做主语．
亮点句型二：What matters most is the opportunity of expanding my horizons as well as making more new friends．最重要的是拓展我的视野，结交更多的新朋友．本句中What matters most 是一个主语从句，what在从句中做主语．

解答 Dear Mr．﹠Mrs．Banks，
I'm Li Hua，who has just graduated from high school this summer．I know that you want some part-timers for your newly-opened restaurant on the Internet and I'd like to be part of your team．
I've been learning English for 10 years，and I can express myself fluently．Besides，I'm diligent and healthy with a nice character，which helps me get along well with people with different backgrounds．（亮点句型一）What matters most is the opportunity of expanding my horizons as well as making more new friends．（亮点句型二）And it is the sense of commitment that I am eager to raise through such a valuable experience that inspires me to make this request．
An early reply at your convenience will be much appreciated if my qualifications meet with your approval．

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．