Question

假设你叫李华，昨天收到了笔友David的e-mail，得知他不久要来杭州，他想了解如何学好中文。请你用英文给他回复一封e-mail，介绍学习中文的体会和方法，提出你的建议，以及表达你帮助他学好中文的愿望。你提出以下建议：

到中文培训机构上课

多看中文节目

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注意：1.对所给要点，逐一陈述，适当发挥，不要简单翻译。

           2.词数100左右。开头和结尾已经写好，不计入总词数。

Dear David,

I’m glad to learn that you’re coming to Hangzhou.____________________________________________

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Answer 1

【答案】

 

One possible version：

  Well, there’re so many methods and I think the following suggestions will be of great help for you. Firstly, you can attend some classes to learn Chinese, where the teachers will teach you a lot. Secondly, reading Chinese books and watching Chinese TV programmes will do good to your listening and reading in Chinese. Thirdly, you can also learn some Chinese songs, which is a good way to learn Chinese well. In addition, you’d better make some Chinese friends, from whom you can learn more about Chinese language and customs. What’s more, keep reminding yourself that practice makes perfect. If you practice every day, I’m sure that your Chinese will be pretty good before long.

I’m looking forward to your coming.  

Yours, Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：电子邮件是很常见的一种应用文体裁，格式开头均已给出，所以写作时只需表达清楚要点建议即可。对于这种建议性写作内容，要开门见山写出写信的原因以及建议的内容和提出建议的理由。在语言方面，要简明扼要，目的明确，而且要有合理性和说服力。在语气上一定要委婉礼貌，要顾及对方的感受。此外写作时还要注意细节上的补充和连接词的恰当使用，以使文章行文连贯，逻辑性强。常用的写作句型：I am writing to share some advice with you . I’m willing to give a hand to you .It should be a good idea for …..等。

【亮点说明】文章开门见山提出写作话题和目的，然后用firstly ,secondly ,thirdly ,in addition 和what’s more 等词汇依次罗列出作者的五条建议，这样的写作手法使文章层次清晰、结构分明、让人一目了然。而且并列句there’re so many methods and I think the following suggestions will be of great help for you.以及定语从句where the teachers will teach you a lot. Secondly,条件状语从句 If you practice every day,等多种复合句将一些松散的信息连接起来，使句子结构更为紧凑，同时也显示了作者对这些高级、复杂句式的灵活掌握。

考点：考查提纲作文。