Question

最近，你校同学正在参加某英文报组织的一场讨论。讨论的主题是：公园要不要收门票?请你根据下表所提供的信息，给报社写一封信，客观地介绍讨论情况。

60％的同学认为	40％的同学认为
1．不应收门票   2．公园是公众休闲的地方   3．如收票，需建大门、围 　　 墙，会影响城市形象	1．应收门票，但票价 　　 不宜高   2．支付园林工人工资   3．购新花木

注意：①信的开头已为你写好。

　　  ②词数：100左右。

　　  ③参考词汇：门票entrance fee

Dear Editor,

    I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.______________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_______________________________________________________________________________

_____________________________________________________________

Yours truly,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

答案：
解析：

书面表达以图表的形式向考生提供所需表达的内容。要求学生给报社编辑写信客观地反映学校就所列内容展开讨论的情况。图表提示，一目了然，考生无须花过多时间去琢磨、组织写作内容，一般不会遗漏要点。近年来书面表达评分标准的完善，有利于鼓励高水平的考生脱颖而出。第五档(很好21～25分)中的4项要求使考生走出了只求稳妥，求准确，用最简单的词汇与结构表达内容而不敢展示自己语言才能的怪圈。     毋庸讳言，不少考生，尤其是得分低的考生，写作中错误百出，即使是得分较高的考生在写作中也存在一些问题。主要表现在：     (1)拼写错误较多，用词不当、搭配不当的问题比较突出。     (2)对动词时态、语态、词形变化掌握较差。     (3)句子成分，基本句型，句子结构掌握较差，句子成分不全。     (4)受母语影响，写出中式英语(Chinglish)。     (5)不能恰当地使用句子间的连接词语，致使篇章结构松散。 Dear Editor,     I’m writing to tell you about the discussion we’ve had about whether an entrance fee should be charged for parks.     Opinions are divided on the question. 60% of the students are against the idea of entrance fee. They believe a public park should be free of charge. People need a place where they can rest and enjoy themselves. Charging entrance fees will no doubt to keep some people away. What is more, it will become necessary to build gates and walls, which will do harm to the appearance of a city.     On the other hand, 40% think that fees should be charged because you need money to pay gardeners and workers, and to buy plants and young trees. They suggest, however, fees should be charged low. Yours truly, Li Hua

提示：