Question

假如你是李华，于11月12日到达纽约，然后去找你的美国朋友Tom，但他不在家。请按以下内容给Tom留张便条。
火车晚点15分钟，与接你的Tom错过；
在火车上认识的定居美国的华人夫妇Taylor把你带到Tom家，Tom不在；
现在Taylor夫妇家；
务必今晚打电话给你64611128.
注意：1.词数100左右
2. 不要逐字翻译，可适当增加细节以使行文连贯；
3. 信的开头已给出，不计入总词数。
Dear Tom，
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Yours,
Li Hua

Answer 1

Dear Tom,
I’m in New York! It’s a really a pity that I didn’t find you at the railway station. You may have left when my train arrived, a quarter behind the schedule.
Luckily, on the train I came across Mr. Taylor and his wife, who are Chinese and have been living in the US for several years. Seeing that there was no one to meet me at the station, they offered to drive me to your house.
As you happen to be out, I’ve decided to accept the Taylors’ offer to stay at their house for the night. I’ve decided to put up here for the night. They are very friendly to me , so don’t worry about me. I’ll be all right. It cannot be better if you can call me at my phone number 64611128 this evening.
Looking forward to meeting you soon.
Yours,
Li Hua

试题分析：这是一篇书信类作文，要点已经给出。我们所要做的就是按要点内容给Tom留张便条。注意题目的要求，写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，一定要把表格中的要点都写出来，不要有遗漏。写作时尽量使用自己不会的单词、词组和句型，同时也要注意使用一些高级语法和句型，使自己的文章更有文采。
点评：本文属于书信类作文，动笔前，一定要认真分析要点，理解要点要表达的含义，不能遗漏要点，跑题偏题。平时除了加强词汇积累，写作联系以外，还可以适当记忆一些类似的范文，这样在考试中可以起到事半功倍的效果。