Question

【题目】假设你是李华，目前正在英国做交换生，你的英国朋友Debbie送了你一张Ceilidh Dance舞会票。现在，请给她写一封邮件致谢，并询问有关情况。（箭头所指内容）。

注意：1.词数100左右；2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Debbie,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Debbie,

I am delighted to receive your ticket for the Ceilidh Dance. I really feel grateful for your kindness and it will surely make my cultural experience here more colorful. Here, I’d like to know some derails about this dance party.

First, could you please give me a brief introduction of this dance so I can know something about it before attending it? Besides, I’d like to know whether I need to bring anything like a bag or a present, and particularly, what kind of clothes and shoes I’m supposed to wear, the formal ones or the casual ones? Finally, I’m wondering how I can get there and avoid being late.

Looking forward to your early reply.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】试题这是一篇提纲类作文，内容是英国朋友Debbie送了你一张Ceilidh Dance舞会票，给她写一封邮件致谢，并询问有关情况。根据图片可知，你需要向Debbie问四方面内容：1. 舞会的介绍；2. 所要带的东西；3. 需要穿的衣服或鞋子；4.怎么到达那儿。写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

【亮点说明】文中使用了非常好的短语和句子为文章增色不少，比如feel grateful for，be supposed to，avoid doing，look forward to；还运用句型：Besides, I’d like to know whether I need to bring anything like a bag or a present, and particularly, what kind of clothes and shoes I’m supposed to wear, the formal ones or the casual ones?这句话运用了宾语从句等。并注意了句子的衔接如first，besides，finally等等。