Question

【题目】假设你是红星中学高三学生李华，请给你的外教Mr. Black写一封邮件，邀请他参加你们学校举行的英语读书会(reading circle)活动，邮件的内容包括：

1. 介绍读书活动的相关信息（例如：时间、地点、活动目的、内容等）；

2. 说明你发出邀请的原因；

3. 询问对方的意向。

注意： 1. 词数不少于100词；

2. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mr. Black,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear Mr. Black,

I hope that everything goes on well with you. I’m writing to invite you to join us in the English reading circle to be held in our school. We’ll feel honored if you are present.

The activity is scheduled at 8:00 am this Friday in the auditorium. Aiming to improve the students’ understanding of the beauty of foreign literature, the reading circle will allow students to communicate with each other face to face, sharing their own reading experience together.

As we consider that you can give us some professional introductions to English literature and some valuable suggestions on English reading, we sincerely hope that you can come to join us.

Would you be kind enough to spare some time for us? Thank you in advance. Hope to hear from you soon.

【解析】

试题分析：本文是要求给外教Mr. Black写一封邮件，邀请他参加学校举行的英语读书会(reading circle)活动。文章给出了汉语提示。成文时应注意以下几点：(1)内容要点齐全，三项内容要写完整。(2)人称使用要恰当。(3)时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主。(4)适当使用一些连词和插入语，使文章自然、流畅。(5)恰当使用一些高级词汇和句型，以增加文章的档次。

亮点说明：1.使用高级句型：条件状语从句We’ll feel honored if you are present；现在分词作状语Aiming to improve the students’ understanding of the beauty of foreign literature, the reading circlewill allow students to communicate with each other face to face, sharing their own reading experience together.；2.使用了重要短语：communicate with each other互相交流；face to face面对面；in advance提前。