Question

1.假如你是李华。你的美国笔友 即将随其父母来中国，并在中国度过中秋节。他来信向你询问有关中秋节的习俗，请你告诉他有关中秋节的习俗。

要点如下：

1.历史悠久。 2. 中国人独有的传统节日。

3. 家庭团圆。4. 共进晚餐。

5. 吃月饼。 6. 赏月。

要求： 1. 词数100左右。

2. 可适当添加细节。

3. 开头已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear Mike,

I’m glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here.

 

 

 

Yours,

Li Hua

 

Answer 1

Dear Mike,

I’m glad to know that you are coming to China with your parents and spend the Mid-Autumn Day here. The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people. It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year, when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together. After that they eat mooncakes, which stands for the spirits of the festival-unity. Often if the weather permits, they will go out of the house to enjoy the bright moonlight, talking about something pleasant. It is one of the most important festivals for Chinese people.

I wish you a pleasant journey and I’m sure you will like our traditional Mid-Autumn Day.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是关于中秋节的习俗。文章的要点基本上都已经给出了，考生只需要翻译再做适当的发挥，在选词的时候，适当的选择一些高级的词汇让文章更有档次。可以使用一些强调句，状语从句等。同时可以用一些连接词让文章更有条理。

【亮点说明】范文中运用一些常见的短语stands for代表；with a long history有很长的历史；The Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival with a long history which is celebrated only by Chinese people.这个句子which引导a traditional festival的定语从句；It falls on August 15th of the Chinese lunar year, when people of a family get together and enjoy the dinner together这个句子when 引导August 15th of the Chinese lunar year的非限制性定语从句；

考点： 提纲类作文