Question

4．用英语写一篇不少于120词的短文，介绍你所喜爱的一位老师．短文要包括以下要点：
1．老师的姓名、年龄、精神面貌；
2．老师对我们的教育和影响；
3．我们对老师的评价．
                           

Answer 1

分析 本文是提纲类作文，根据题目要求可知用第一人称，一般现在时．文章分为三部分：一 老师的基本情况；二 老师对我们的教育和影响；三 对老师的评价．
高分句型：
1．Compared with other teachers（方式状语，Compare和主语Mrs．Amon 之间是主动关系），Mrs．Amon pays more attention to her way of teaching．
与其他的老师相比，Amon老师更多的关注她的教学方法．
So，instead of giving us answers immediately，she encourages us to think by ourselves whenever （引导让步状语从句，表示"凡是…的时候"）she puts forward questions．instead of 表示"不是"，put forward 表示"提出"．
当她提出问题的时候，不是立刻给我们答案，她鼓励我们自己思考答案．

解答 My Teacher Mrs．Amon
Of all my teachers，Mrs．Amon is the one who impresses me most．Though she is 44，she looks very young for her age．And she's one of the most popular teachers in our school．（老师的基本情况）
Compared with other teachers，Mrs．Amon pays more attention to her way of teaching．（高分句型一）She tries various ways to make her classes lively and interesting．In her opinion，we should not only know"what"，but also understand"why"．So，instead of giving us answers immediately，she encourages us to think by ourselves whenever she puts forward questions（高分句型二）．With her help，we've learned how to analyze and settle problems．What a wonderful world of"why"she leads us to!（老师对我们的教育和影响）
She is such a learned person that we all admire her very much．We are very lucky to meet such a good teacher，and we will remember her forever．（对老师的评价）

点评 本文属于人物类短文写作，属于提纲类的作文，对考生的要求较高．要求考生组织好要点，在进行串联写作．写作时要使用合适的连接词连接起全文，同时注意组织全文的要点顺序，使文章更有条理．