Question

16．假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文．文中共有10处错误，每句中最多有两处．错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改．
    增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号（Λ），并在其下面写出该加的词．
    删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉．
    修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词．
注意：
    1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
    2．只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分．（请不要在此处作答，否则不给分）
Have you ever had a headache during a test？Have you ever been too worried about something that you have a headache or even can't sleep at night？If so，then you know that stress is．
Not all stress is bad for you．Some kinds of stress can help you get things do better，like when you are running towards the finishing line or when you are being asked to give a speech to your class．Stress sometimes can help push you to make full preparation for a test．However，too much stress can result in anger，depression and other related problems，which we need to take serious．
There are many things in our life what might cause stress------having too much homework，taking a difficult test，and having economic problems．
It's impossible to live in a life completely free of stress，so you should learn to deal with stress．The best way reduce stress is to have a balanced life．If you get enough sleep，eat properly，take more exercise and have enough fun time，you'll probable feel less stressed．

Answer 1

分析 本文主要讲述什么是压力，压力的类型和如何缓解压力．作者在文中告诉我们战胜压力最好的方式就是保持平衡的生活习惯，按时休息均衡饮食，坚持锻炼等．

解答 Have you ever had a headache during a test？Have you ever been tooworried about something that you have a headache or even can't sleep at night？If so，then you know that stress is．
Not all stress is bad for you．Some kinds of stress can help you get things dobetter，like when you are running towards the finishing line or when you are being asked to give a speech to your class．Stress sometimes can help push you to make full preparation for a test．However，too much stress can result in anger，depression and other related problems，which we need to take serious．
There are many things in our life what might cause stress------having too much homework，taking a difficult test，and having economic problems．
It's impossible to live in a life completely free of stress，so you should learn to deal with stress．The best way∧reduce stress is to have a balanced life．If you get enough sleep，eat properly，take more exercise and have enough fun time，you'll probable feel less stressed．
详解：
1．too改为so 考查固定搭配．so…that…意为"如此/这么…以致于…"，句型中的so是副词，常常用来修饰形容词或副词，常用句型为：主语+谓语+so+adj．/adv．+that从句．
2．that改为what 考查连词．is缺少表语，用what作其表语，同时引导宾语从句．
3．do改为done 考查过去分词．get sth．done意为"使某事被做"，主语是人，表示主语请别人帮忙做某事，即主语使某事被别人干，用过去分词作宾语补足语．
4．去掉when 考查连词．当or连接两个单句时，为避免重复，将后一单句中相同的部分省略．
5．preparation改为preparations 考查名词复数．make preparations意为"作准备"，是固定搭配．
6．serious改为seriously 考查固定搭配．take…seriously意为"认真地对待某人或某事"，是固定搭配．
7．what改为which/that 考查定语从句．分析句子结构可知这是一个定语从句，先行词many things在从句中作主语，用关系代词which/that．what不引导定语从句．
8．去掉in 考查固定搭配．live a life意为"过日子"，是固定搭配．
9．reduce前加to 考查动词不定式．way后接of介词短语或动词不定式短语作定语．
10．probable改为probably 考查副词．feel是动词，要用副词修饰．

点评 高考短文改错题的形式有说明文，短文故事，书信等，具有很强的实用性．短文的内容和语言都符合高中学生的实际，从表面上看类似一篇学生习作．首先，通读全文，了解短文大意，把握全篇的时态、人称及行文逻辑，在通读全文时把一些容易的错误先改好，再进行逐句改错．其次，要进行逐个句子的改错．这是要对文中的词法、句法和语篇着重分析和特别注意．最后把改好的短文再阅读一遍，检查答案是否正确，感觉是否还有不妥之处，最终形成定稿．