Question

【题目】假如你是高三学生李华。你从新华网上得知21st Century 就我们如何支配压岁钱向大家征稿。请用英文向报社投稿，介绍你的预算。

注意：

1. 词数在100字左右；

2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯；

3.开头已为你写好。不计入总词数。

Dear Sir，

I’ve learned from www. xinhua. com that you are looking for articles on how to spend gift money._____________

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Sir,

I’ve learned from www.xinhua.com that you are looking for articles on how to spend gift money.

In China, it is common for us children to receive gift money during the Spring Festival. So it is important for us to put the money to good use. How I budget my gift money is as follows.

First of all, I want to buy some books to enrich myself. In addition, I will join in a summer camp, which can not only broaden my horizons but also help me get connected with others to develop the spirit of teamwork. In addition, I plan to give away some of my money to those who are in need of help.

Anyway, we should spend our gift money doing something useful and meaningful.

Yours sincerely.

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封投稿信件；你从新华网上得知21st Century 就我们如何支配压岁钱向大家征稿，于是你写信介绍你的预算，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：the Spring Fetival （春节），budget my gift money（预算我的压岁钱），enrich myself（丰富自己），broaden my horizons（开拓视野），do something useful and meaningful（做一些有用和有意义的事情）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如In China, it is common for us children to receive gift money during the Spring Fetival.；定语从句及not only…but also…的应用I will join in a summer camp, which can not only broaden my horizons but also help me get connected with others to develop the spirit of teamwork；In addition, I plan to give away some of my money to those who are in need of help；词组first of all，in addition的使用，使得文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。