Question

下面短文中有10处语言错误。请在有错误的地方增加、删除或修改某个单词。
增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(^)，并在其下面写上该加的词。
删除：把多余的词用斜线 (＼)划掉。
修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写上修改后的词。
注意：1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；
只允许修改l0处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。
For anyone who is  determined to be a fashion designer, it is not enough to have succeeded in college. The real test is if they can survive, and become established during his early 20s, make a name for themselves in the real world which business skills can be as important as creativity.
Fashion is a hard business. There is a large number of stress because work is at a constant and extremely fast speed to prepare for the next season’s collections. It is extremely competitive and there is the constant need to make attractive advertisement of the late fashion in newspapers and magazines. It also requires continual freshness because of the appetite for new ideas are hard to satisfy. “We try to warn people before they come to us about how tough it is.” says Lydia Kemeny, Chairman of Fashion at St. Martin’s School of Art in London. “And we pointed out that drive and determination are absolutely necessary.”

Answer 1

【小题1】if-whether
【小题2】his-their
【小题3】make-making
【小题4】which-in which/where
【小题5】number-amount
【小题6】advertisement- advertisements
【小题7】late - latest
【小题8】because of - because
【小题9】are -is
【小题10】pointed - point

解析试题分析：
【小题1】关系词用法错误。这里考查表语从句，只能用whether，不能用if。
【小题2】人称代词用法错误。因为句前的主语为they，故所有格用their。
【小题3】非谓语动词用法错误。这里现在分词making作结果状语。
【小题4】关系词用法错误。这里考查定语从句，先行词world在从句中作状语，故用in which或where。
【小题5】名词用法错误。因为stress为不可数名词，故用amount，number后只能接可数名词。
【小题6】名词单复数用法错误。因为advertisement为可数名词，故用复数形式。
【小题7】形容词用法错误。这里要表示“最新的”，故用形容词latest。
【小题8】连词用法错误。这里because为连词，后接从句，because of只可接名词或动名词。
【小题9】单复数用法错误。主语为ideas，故谓语动词用复数形式。
【小题10】时态用法错误。根据全文时态用一般现在时，故此处用一般现在时。
考点：考查词汇语法用法