Question

【题目】假定你是李华，你的加拿大朋友Tom要来南充参观，想让你给他推荐一家酒店。请你给他写封邮件:，内容要点如下:

1.酒店的位置:

2. 推荐的理由；

注意: 1.词数100左右；

2.可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；

3.开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。

Dear Tom.

I'm more than pleased to hear

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Tom,

I’m more than pleased to hear that you’re coming to pay a visit to my city, Nanchong. Now let me recommend an affordable and comfortable hotel to you: Tianlai International Hotel.

Tianlai International Hotel, located on the Jialing River, is only a quarter’s drive from Nanchong Airport. As a result, it’s convenient for you to get around.

On the other hand, the five-star hotel is newly built, with the latest equipment and beautiful decorations.

Most importantly, the service is the best in this district. Accommodated there, you’ll feel free and at home. You are free to use WiFi and hot water is available all around the clock.

Wish you a happy stay here.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一封推荐信，是一篇提纲式作文，时态是一般现在时。

第一步：审题：考生应认真审题，把握文章中心，明确写作要点和所使用时态。这是一封推荐信，写作要点：1.酒店位置；2.推荐理由。写作过程中注意一些句式和短语的使用，写作过程中注意一些连接词和过渡句使用，使上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。

第二步：关键词组：1. be located on 坐落于….

2.a five-star standard hotel五星级标准酒店

3. feel free and at home让某人感到宾至如归等。

第三步：连词成句：1.Tianlai International Hotel, located on the Jialing River, is only a quarter’s drive from Nanchong Airport.

2. On the other hand, the five-star hotel is newly built, with the latest equipment and beautiful decorations.

3. Most importantly, the service is the best in this district. Accommodated there, you’ll feel free and at home.等。

第四步：衔接自然：使用过渡词（组）As a result；On the other hand；Most importantly等。

此外还要注意字数，逻辑关系。