Question

【题目】假定你是学生会主席李华, 学生会举办了英语演讲比赛，得到了外教Miss Smith的大力帮助。活动圆满结束后，请给她写一封感谢信, 内容包括：

1. 表达感谢；

2. 回顾外教的帮助；

3. 总结同学们的收获。

注意：1. 词数80左右;

2. 可适当增加细节, 以使行文连贯。

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Answer 1

【答案】Dear Miss Smith

I'm writing to express my sincere gratitude for your kind help in the school English Drama Festival, which has turned out to be an amazing success.It's so nice of you to have offered us a class of presentation skills and basic stage techniques. Under your professional guidance, the participants gave such an impressive performance. Some students overcame the fear of acting in front of audience and gained tremendous confidence. Others developed communication skills and knew how to cooperate in a team. Most importantly, this activity has fueled our passion for English drama.

Many thanks for your time and support.

Yours

Li Hua

【解析】

这是一篇应用文。文章要求考生给 Miss Brown写一封感谢信，感谢她在学生会举办的英语戏剧节中提供的帮助。

这是写给外教 Miss Brown的一封感谢信。文章话题比较贴近学生生活，所给要点比较简单，难度不大。因为是感谢信，所以用于应该礼貌客气。考生可以先根据要点提示列出写作大纲，首先应该表示对Miss Brown的感激，可以选用 Thanks for,thankful/ grateful等字眼。其次，要明确 Miss Brown提供了哪些帮助；最后，要写出同学们的收获。第二和第三要点应该用过去时态。列完大纲之后，对大纲进行遣词造句，细节等方面的扩展。可以考虑使用定语从句、非谓语动词、名词性从句等。最后，可以用适当的连接词将三个要点连接起来，突出文章的紧凑性和连贯性。