Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（\）划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Wolf Warrior Ⅱ, which opens across the country on July 27, 2017, was the biggest hit of the summer. My family went to see the film on last week. We arrived at the cinema ahead of time, finding it was crowded and people were talking about the film excited. I couldn’t wait see my favorite star Wu Jing, whom plays a Chinese soldier in the film. It’s a fun film combined lots of action and some humor with “feelings” for friend and families. We were all moved by the words at an end of the film. I will keep them in mind that my great motherland are always behind me.

Answer 1

【答案】1.opens 改为 opened

2. on last week 中删除on

3. excited改为excitedly

4.see my favorite 前加 to

5. whom改为who

6. combined改为combining

7.friend 改为friends

8. at an end of中an改为the

9. them改为it

10. are改为is

【解析】

本文是一篇故事，作者讲述了全家人看电影《战狼Ⅱ》的经过和感受。

1.考查动词时态。根据时间July 27, 2017可知发生在过去，用一般过去时。故opens 改为 opened.

2.考查介词。时间短语last week前不加任何介词，故on last week 中删除on.

3.考查副词。此处修饰动词talk用副词，指兴奋地谈论。故excited改为excitedly.

4.考查动词不定式。此处指我迫不及待想看我最喜欢的影星吴京，迫不及待做某事是can’t /couldn’t wait to do sth.用动词不定式形式。故see my favorite 前加 to.

5.考查关系代词。句中包含定语从句，先行词是Wu Jing指人，在定语从句中做主语，用关系代词who引导。whom在定语从句中作宾语，故whom改为who.

6.考查非谓语动词。combined是过去分词，表被动。句中film和动词combine是主动关系，指电影是动作和幽默的结合，用动词-ing形式。故combined改为combining.

7.考查名词。和and后的families并列，泛指家人和朋友，用复数形式。故friend 改为friends.

8.考查冠词。此处指在电影结束时，表示“在……尽头；在……结束时“是at the end of，是固定短语。故at an end of中an改为the.

9.考查代词。此处指的是把that my great motherland is always behind me.这句话记在心里，用it代指这句话，故them改为it.

10.考查主谓一致。主语my great motherland是单数，与之一致谓语动词也用单数，故are改为is.