Question

最近，越来越多的学生在校外租房而不愿住大宿舍。请根据下面提示，一分为二地用英语写一篇短文，说说两者各自的好处与坏处，并表明自己的观点。词数100左右。
1. 学习时间；  2. 安全；  3. 自由性；  4. 与同学交往；  5. 学习效果。
注意：可从其他角度阐述，但两方面的理由都至少要有两条。
要求：字迹工整，段落清晰。
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               
                                                                               

Answer 1

One possible version:
Nowadays, some students would not like to live in a dorm. Instead, they rent houses outside the school. There are advantages for both. Living in a dorm can increase friendship and cooperation between classmates. And of cause it is safer.
A dorm is more like a society, which enables students to learn to adapt to each other, thus preparing for the social life later. As for renting houses to live alone , it’s better for studyas you can feel free in your own room without being interrupted by others.
As a result, you can have more time and devote yourself to studying whole-heartedly. But there may appear some safety problems as you live outside of the school.
Anyhow, as a student, I prefer living in a dorm.

解析试题分析：本文是一篇观点论述性书面表达。第1段导入：提出一种现象或某个决定作为议论的话题。第2段对这一话题进行正反分述，本段一般也采用总分总或总分的写作特点，让评卷老师一目了然。当然在表述时要注意句式变换，主被动兼用，切勿单纯翻译，结构单一。第3段结论：：照应第1段，亮明观点，构成"总—分—总"结构。
考点：本文是一篇观点论述性书面表达。
点评：观点对比类作文一般分为三段式，总+分+总的格式，在组织语言上基本步骤如下：
①  给观点分组讨论类
开头模版 Recently,we had a heated discussion on ****                
论述观点 when it comes to this hot topic ,students'views vary from people to people ,some people think that ****  ,nevertheless ,just as the saying goes"every coin has two sides " ,so others have the opposite opinion ,they  consider that ***
结尾as far as i concerned,Ithink that ****
②一些精彩亮点连接词  in addition ,what"s more ,furthermore
moreover（另外）
last but not least important ,most important （最重要的是）
worst of all （最糟糕的是）,
to make matters wores（更糟的是）
as far as i concerned, personally（我个人看来）
however ,nevertheless（然而）