Question

假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom最近身体不舒服，来信向你询问如何保持健康。请你给他写一些回信并提出建议。内容如下：

注意合理饮食；

多参加体育锻炼；

保证充足睡眠。

注意：1. 词数100个左右；

2. 可适当增加细节， 以使行文连贯；

3. 新的开头和结尾已为你写好（不计入总词数）。

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you!

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Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

One possible version：

Dear Tom,

How nice to hear from you! In your letter you ask me how to keep healthy. I’d like to give you some advice.

As we know, we teenagers grow very fast, so we need large quantities of nutritious food, such as fish, beans, fresh fruit and vegetables. You shouldn’t eat too much meat or too many sweets. Besides, it’s good for you to take physical exercise regularly instead of studying all the time. What’s more, having enough sleep is of great importance, and as a result, I advise you to have at least eight hours of sleep every day and not to stay up too late.

Only in these ways can you be in good health. I am hoping you will be better soon.

Best wishes!

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

试题分析：本文是一篇提纲类作文，要求根据所给的内容写一封建议信。根据提示信息可知文章应该用第一人称，要点包括：注意合理饮食、多参加体育锻炼、保证充足睡眠和自己的建议等几方面内容。因为是建议信，要注意书信的格式，语气要委婉。写作时可充分发挥想象，以使文章内容丰满，并且要达到要求的字数。此外，还要注意使用多种句式和高级词汇来提高文章档次。

【亮点说明】本篇书面表达使用了三段式结构，第一段点明写信的缘由，第二段给出三条建议，第三段表达自己的观点。结构清晰，观点鲜明，衔接词“besides”“ what’s more”的使用让文章更加流畅。Only in these ways can you…也让文章增添了亮色。

考点：考查提纲作文