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4．2014年9月3日，国务院颁布了《关于深化考试招生制度改革的实施意见》，其中关于启动高考综合改革试点工作时提到部分科目将实行一年多考，对此人们反应不一．请根据下表的提示，写一篇英语短文．

支持	1．学生可自主选择参考时间，有利于提高高考成绩．       2．部分科目提前考完，可以减轻考生的学习压力．
反对	1．多次考试，会增加考生的负担．       2．增加考试成本，浪费教育资源．
你的看法	…

词数：120左右
注意：短文的开头已给出，不计入总数．
According to the trials of comprehensive college entrance examination reform that the State Council has made．some of the subjects will be examined many times in a year．People have different opinions about this．
Some say that this program gives students more free time．Students can choose the exam time themselves and it's obviously an effective way to improve their grades of the university entrance examination．In addition，if some of the subjects are finished ahead of time，students will be in less pressure during the time．
However，there are also many people against the program．They hold the view that it will increase the burdens of the students by frequent tests．Also，it is a waste of education resources because the exams will cost more in this case．
In my opinion，to pass the exam before the fixed time is a good way to relax ourselves while we are all under the pressure of the university entrance examination．So I'm looking forward to seeing the reform program brought into force．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是一篇提纲作文．根据所提供的材料信息，写一篇短文，介绍人们对国务院颁布的《关于深化考试招生制度改革的实施意见》中部分学科实行一年多考的不同反应．写作要点包括：1．支持的观点及原因； 2．反对的观点及原因；3．你的看法．
写作时时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主，人称以第三人称为主．
重要短语：according to （根据），in addition （除…之外还），ahead of time （提前），be in pressure （处在压力之中），beagainst （反对），increase the burdens of （增加…的负担），awaste of  （浪费…），in this case （在这种情况下），in one'sopinion （某人认为），a good way to sth（做某事的好方法），look forward to doing （期望做某事），bring sthinto force．（实施）．
【高分句型】

1．According to the trials of comprehensive college entrance examination reform that the State Council has made，
这里是that引导的定语从句，先行词是the trials of comprehensive college entrance examination reform，that在定语从句中作made的宾语．
2．They hold the view that it will increase the burdens of the students by frequent tests．
这里是that引导的同位语从句，解释说明前面的名词the view．
3．to pass the exam before the fixed time is a good way to relax ourselves while we are all under the pressure of the university entrance examination．
这里是动词不定式作主语，谓语动词为is，表语为a good way to relax ourselves．while we are all under the pressure of the university entrance examination作时间状语．

解答 According to the trials of comprehensive college entrance examination reform that the State Council has made，【高分句型】someof the subjects will be examined many times in a year．People have differentopinions about this．（开头---引出话题）
Some say that this program gives students more free time．Students can choose the exam time themselves and it's obviously an effective way to improve theirgrades of the university entrance examination．In addition，if some of thesubjects are finished ahead of time，students will be in less pressure duringthe time．（支持）
    However，there are also many people against the program．They hold theview that it will increase the burdens of the students by frequent tests．【高分句型】Also，it is a waste of education resources becausethe exams will cost more in this case．（反对）
Inmy opinion，to pass the exam before the fixed time is a good way to relaxourselves while we are all under the pressure of the university entranceexamination．【高分句型】So I'm looking forward to seeing there form program brought into force．（自己的观点）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．