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11．假如你是李华，你在新学校学习已两个多月，请根据下列提示，用英语给你的朋友Jane写封电子邮件，谈一谈你的高中生活．
　　1．介绍你的学校和班级
　　2．你的作息时间
　　3．你的同学
　　4．你最喜欢的老师…
注意：可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯，词数不少于100．
Dear Jane，
I've been at Senior High School for more than two months．I'm writing down my thoughts about my new school life．My new school is                                            ．

Answer 1

分析 本篇书面表达属于提纲类作文，根据提示信息你在新学校学习已两个多月，请根据下列提示，用英语给你的朋友Jane写封电子邮件，谈一谈你的高中生活，写作时注意以下几点：1、仔细阅读有关提示，弄清试题提供的所有信息，明确几个要点：介绍你的学校和班级；你的作息时间；你的同学；你最喜欢的老师…2、提纲是文章的总体框架，要在提纲的范围内进行分析、构思和想象．要依据提示情景或词语，按照一定逻辑关系来写．本文写作时可以按照要点所给的顺序写．3、根据要表达的内容确定句子的时态、语态；就本文而言应该用一般现在时态．4．注意使用高级词汇和句式，以增加文章的亮点．
【亮点说明】本文结构紧凑，层次分明，而且使用了多种表达：with a long history有有悠久的历史；get on very well with 与…相处的好；get up起床；take part in参加
My new school is a well-known school with a long history．（高分句型一）
And there are sixty students in my class，who are all hard-working．（高分句型二）
My teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms．Wang，whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers．（高分句型三）

解答 Dear Jane，
       I've been at Senior High School for more than two months．I'm writing down my thought about my new school life．
       My new school is a well-known school with a long history．（高分句型一）There are 50 classes，more than 300 teachers and over 3，500 students in my school．The classrooms are amazing．Every room has a computer with a special screen，almost as big as a cinema screen．And there are sixty students in my class，who are all hard-working．（高分句型二） I'm getting on very well with my classmates．Our teachers are very friendly．My favorite subject is English．My teacher is a very enthusiastic woman called Ms．Wang，whose way of teaching is nothing like that of my previous teachers．（高分句型三）She usually tells us something in an interesting way．I don't think I will be bored in her class．
       We usually get up at 6：30 and our class starts at 8：00．I always take part in colorful after-class activities and we go to bed at ten．
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Yours，
                                                                                                                                                                                                  Li Hua

点评 英语写作是一项主观性较强的测试题．它不仅考查学生的写作基础而且还考查学生在写作过程中综合运用语言的能力．在撰写时要注意主谓语一致，时态呼应，用词贴切等．要提高英语写作水平，需要两方面的训练：一是语言基础方面的训练，要有扎实的造句、翻译等基本功，即用词法、句法等知识造出正确无误的句子；二是写作知识和能力 方面的训练以掌握写作方面的基本方法和技巧．