Question

【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。错误涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏词符号（n），并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线（＼）划掉。

修改：在错的词下画一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：

1．每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2.只允许修改10处，多者（从第11处起）不计分。

Dear Mandy，

Pm not doing well in my lessons at school，especial in maths. My dad says I must try hard because he wants me go to university. He thinks I'm lazy，but it's not true. I work really hard， often study late into the night！I've tried to talk to my mother，but she always said I have to work as hard like my brother does. My brother doesn't study very hard，and he always gets excellent

grades. It's not fair！

The only thing I like it is art. My teacher says rm the best student she's had for year. When I told my dad，all he said was，“You mustn't waste your time in art. You must focus your mind on your lessons！”Pm feeling quite puzzling what to do now．Would you please help me out?

Thanks a lot！

Yours sincerely，

Lisa

Answer 1

【答案】

【1】especial改为especially

【2】me后加to

【3】study改为studying

【4】like改为as

【5】去掉it

【6】in改为on/over

【7】puzzling改为puzzled

【解析】

【1】此处是状语应当用副词；

【2】want sb to do sth，不定式作宾补；

【3】根据句子结构，此处是状语，故用非谓语动词，又因为是伴随状语，故用现在分词，表示和句子主语是主动关系。said改为says，根据语境用一般现在时态。

【4】as……as 是固定搭配；and改为but，与上文形成转折关系。

【5】I like 是定语从句，不能再加it,省略了引导词that在此代替the only thing 做like的宾语。year改为years，根据句意应当是复数，表示多年。

【6】在……浪费……，waste……on/over ……。

【7】感到困惑的用puzzled；令人困惑的用puzzling；