Question

假设你是李响，准备参加学校举办的主题为“健康成长”的英语作文比赛。请按要求写一篇短文，主要内容包括：
乐观的人生态度；
参加体育锻炼；
健康的饮食习惯。
注意： 1. 词数 100 左右；
2. 可适当增加细节；
3. 开头已为你写好。
We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                     
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       
                                                                                       

Answer 1

We all want to grow up happily and healthily, and for this goal we must do several things.
Firstly, we should develop a positive attitude towards life. Life consists of not only sunshine but also hard times. We should be brave when faced with difficulties.
Secondly, we must study hard because knowledge is power. If we have the power, we can contribute to building our country and at the same time enjoy a better life.
Maintaining a healthy body is fundamental to leading a fulfilling, successful life. The secret to a healthy body is regular exercise and a balanced diet combined.

解析试题分析：此作文题目是一篇材料作文，要求写出三个方面的问题，青少年要健康成长一要有乐观的人生态度，二要积极参加体育锻炼，三还要有健康的饮食习惯，所以考生在审题时要主要内容的全面性，同时可以适当的加入连词，使文章浑然一体，例如firstly, first of all,besides,what’s more and so on.
【亮点说明】文章有两个方面的亮点我们应该学习，一是文章的连贯性很强，浑然天成，这充分的体现在一些连贯词的使用上，例如firstly,secondly 等，第二方面是文章巧妙的使用了一些固定结构例如not only---but also---；名言例如knowledge is power;以及固定短语的使用consist of,contribute to—等。
考点: 考查学生语言的综合运用能力