Question

请根据下面四幅图画内容，写一篇短文，记述昨天发生在你叔叔身上的事。

注意：1.词数120以上。2.参考词汇：吊销驾照　 revoke a driving license

 

Answer 1

【答案】

My uncle will never forget what happened to him yesterday.

Yesterday evening my uncle was invited to dinner by his friends. He was so glad

that he drank a lot of beer. As a result he got drunk. After the meal, his friends tried to persuade him not to drive home, but he didn’t listen to them, saying “No problem” and insisted on doing so. He got into the car and drove away. A few minutes later, he was winding his way in the street when his car ran into a tall tree. He was badly injured but still alive. The police came to the scene, and he was taken to hospital. Unfortunately he had to stay in hospital for several days .Worse still, he was fined by the police and his driving license was revoked.

How he regretted what he had done!

【解析】

试题分析：本文记叙的是叔叔酒后驾车引起事故的故事。在审题的时候，注意本文的时态为一般过去时，可以把要点分为四点，朋友聚餐喝酒；结束以后和朋友道别；驾车出了事故；接受警察的教育。尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次。特别注意在选择句式时要赋予变化。

考点：考查看图作文

点评：看图作文要求考生将画面所包含的有效信息直接运用英语思维转换成英语语言文字，再根据这些要点谋篇布局。要求考生把看到的图画用文字表达出来，除了能表达清楚图画中的信息外，考生还需要根据词数要求，适当拓展并发挥想象，从而使文章的叙述不单调。如果是记叙文类的写作素材，考生要注意故事的时间、地点、人物、事件的起因、过程、结果这六个要素；如果是说明文或议论文，考生则首先要对图画的内容进行描述，然后围绕图画的信息进行说明或议论。此时考生一定要注意把握图画的中心思想，写出图画要反映的内容。