Question

【题目】英国姐妹学校的老师Dr.Smith将要来你们学校开展教学活动。来华前，他给你们年级的学生写了一封公开信，调查需求情况。

Dear students,

I'm so excited about my trip to China next month.I can't wait to see your school and give my lessons there.Just a few things I'd like to know.What do you hope to get out of these lessons?What topics do you find most interesting? And what kind of teachers do you like?

I am looking forward to your reply.

Sincerely yours,

Paul Smith

假定你是李华，请根据来信内容代表同学们写一封回信，内容包括：

1.欢迎Dr.Smith的来临；

2.回复信中提出的问题；

3.表达对他到来的期盼。

注意：

1.词数100-120字左右；

2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Dr.Smith,

My classmates and I became very excited hearing you would give us lessons.

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Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Dr.Smith,

My classmates and I became very excited hearing you would give us lessons.The purpose of writing is to reply to the questions in your letter.

As for what we hope to get out of your classes,we're most interested in improving our spoken English and increasing our vocabulary.We are also keen to learn more about the customs and culture of your country,especially what kids of our own age there are interested in.Would you tell us what movies and music they like?How about their school life?Our teachers here in China are usually very kind and hardworking,but also very strict,so we hope that our lessons with you will be a little more interesting and lively than those we are used to.

We can't wait for you to arrive.We're really looking forward to your lessons.

Yours sincerely,

Li Hua

【解析】本篇书面表达属于应用文，要求写一封回信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封回信；英国姐妹学校的老师Dr.Smith将要来你们学校开展教学活动，来华前，他给你们年级的学生写了一封公开信，调查需求情况；根据来信内容代表同学们写一封回信，内容包括：欢迎Dr.Smith的来临，回复信中提出的问题，表达对他到来的期盼。时态应为一般现在时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：reply（答复），spoken English（口语），increase our vocabulary（增加词汇量），customs and culture（习俗和文化），kind and hardworking（善良而勤奋），strict（严厉的）等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。

【亮点说明】

范文内容完整，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当。作者在范文中使用了较多高级表达方式，如宾语从句As for what we hope to get out of your classes,we're most interested in improving our spoken English and increasing our vocabulary.；比较级及定语从句so we hope that our lessons with you will be a little more interesting and lively than those (that) we are used to；非谓语动词的运用The purpose of writing is to reply to the questions in your letter.全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。