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【题目】假定英语课上老师要求同桌之间交换修改作文，请你修改你同桌写的以下作文。文中共有10处语言错误，每句中最多有两处。每处错误仅涉及一个单词的增加、删除或修改。

增加：在缺词处加一个漏字符号(∧)，并在其下面写出该加的词。

删除：把多余的词用斜线(\)划掉。

修改：在错的词下划一横线，并在该词下面写出修改后的词。

注意：1.每处错误及其修改均仅限一词；

2．只允许修改10处，多者(从第11处起)不计分。

Last summer, I went to work as a volunteer teacher in a small village, that is located in the south of our country. The children there were all from poor families, but they didn't have nice clothes to wear or food eat. They had to do much housework as our parents had gone to work in cities to make money. They had to take care for their little brothers or sisters. They live a hard life. But they were eager to learn less about the outside world. When asking about their dreams, they gave me the same answer. They said they hoped they could return to their small villages after graduating from college to make their hometown the more beautiful.

Answer 1

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【解析】１.此处village是先行词，指物，在后面的非限制定语从句中做主语，因为是非限制定语从句，故把ｔｈａｔ―――ｗｈｉｃｈ。

２.句意：那里的孩子都来自贫穷家庭，所以他们没有好的衣服穿，没有好的东西吃。此处表示因果关系，故把ｂｕｔ―――ｓｏ。

３. 句意：那里的孩子都来自贫穷家庭，所以他们没有好的衣服穿，没有好的东西吃。动词不定式做后置定语，故在ｅａｔ前加ｔｏ。

４.句意：他们必须做很多家务，因为他们的父母去城市打工。故把ｏｕｒ―――ｔｈｅｉｒ。

５.句意：他们不得不照顾他们的小弟弟或小妹妹。ｔａｋｅ　ｃａｒｅ　ｏｆ照顾，故在ｃａｒｅ后加ｏｆ。

６.句意：他们过着艰苦的生活。根据句意可知句子用一把过去时态，故把ｌｉｖｅ―――ｌｉｖｅｄ。

７.句意：但是他们渴望想了解更多外面的世界。故把ｌｅｓｓ―――ｍｏｒｅ。

８.句意：当问到他们的梦想时，他们的回答是一样的。句子主语ｔｈｅｙ和ａｓｋ之间是一种被动关系，故用过去分词做时间状语，把ａｓｋｉｎｇ―――ａｓｋｅｄ。

９.根据前面可知这些孩子是一个村子的，故把villages―――village。

１０.句意：使他们的家乡更美丽。此处是比较级，故把ｍｏｒｅ前的ｔｈｅ去掉。