Question

3．留意一下我们的周边，可以发现陪读现象已蔚然成风．请你根据以下要点写一篇短文，内容应包括：
1．简要描述陪读现象．
2．分析父母陪读的原因（2至3个）．
3．发表你对此的看法．
注意：词数100-120词．
These parents are willing to leave their hometown，even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus．Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children．Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids．Meanwhile，it can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．
Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．Thus，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future．
Trust leads to independence．So it seems to me that parents should create room for children's growth and study in order to ensure their overall development．．

Answer 1

分析 本文是提纲作文，根据所给提示关于陪读现象写一篇短文．写作要点：1．简要描述陪读现象． 2．分析父母陪读的原因（2至3个）．3．发表你对此的看法．属提纲作文．在写作时人称以第三人称为主．时态以一般现在时和一般将来时为主．重要短语：be willing to （愿意做某事），quit jobs （放弃工作），so as to （目的是），take care of（照顾），offer sth to sb（提供某物给某人），allow sb to do sth（允许某人做某事），keep track of （跟踪），get into the habit of （养成…习惯），lead to （导致），in order to（为了）．

解答 These parents are willing to leave their hometown，even quit their jobs to follow their children into the campus．Most of them rent an apartment nearby so as to take good care of their children．【高分句型】Parents consider it necessary to offer a better living condition to the kids．Meanwhile，it can allow them to keep track of the kids'academic performance．（描述陪读现象）
 Nevertheless，what they've ignored is that it will get their kids into the habit of being dependent．【高分句型】Thus，they will never develop the ability of self-control in the future．（分析父母陪读的原因）
 Trust leads to independence．So it seems to me that parents should create room for children's growth and study in order to ensure their overall development．【高分句型】（发表看法）

点评 提纲作文在写作时要注意内容是否包含了所有要点．写作时注意准确运用时态，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系，尽量使用自己熟悉的单词句式，同时也要注意使用高级词汇和高级句型使文章显得更有档次，平时需注意积累短语和重要句型．