Question

最近有些同学偷偷在教室或宿舍吸烟，为此你班召开了一次讨论会。请你根据下表讨论结果给某英文报写封100词左右的信介绍讨论情况，并简单陈述你的看法。

75%的同学反对吸烟	25%的同学赞成吸烟
1. 吸烟能导致很多疾病； 2. 吸烟浪费金钱； 3. 吸烟可能引起火灾。	1. 吸烟是一种时髦； 2. 吸烟很有趣； 3. 吸烟可以提神

 注意：信的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。

Dear editor,

These days some students in our class smoke in the classrooms or dormitories after class.        

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Yours truly,

Li Ming

 

Answer 1

【答案】

Dear editor,

These days some students in our class smoke in the classrooms or dormitories after class.   Our class had a meeting to discuss this issue. The students have two different opinions. 75% of the students think smoking is a bad habit. Firstly, smoking can cause a lot of diseases. Secondly, smoking is a waste of money. Moreover, careless smokers may cause dangerous fires.

However, 25% of the students hold the idea that smoking is a kind of fashion. Meanwhile, they think smoking is of great fun. Besides, smoking can refresh themselves.

In my opinion, smoking is not only harmful to smokers themselves, but also to non-smokers. Therefore, I hope all the smokers can give up smoking at once.

Yours truly,

Li Ming

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