Question

【题目】假如你是李华，你的泰国朋友Saipan给你发来电子邮件说他最近学习状态不佳。请根据以下要点，给Saipan回复e-mail，给他介绍几个自我激励的方法。

提示：

1. 每天花十五分钟做自己喜欢的事；

2. 随身携带纸和笔，每天至少记下一件让你感到骄傲的事；

3. 停止负面思考，专注于解决学习问题。

注意：

1. 词数100左右；

2. 负面思考negative thinking；

3. 可适当加入细节，以使行文连贯。

Dear Saipan,

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Yours,

Li Hua

Answer 1

【答案】Dear Saipan,

How are you doing? I’m sorry to hear that you’re not in a good state of learning.

Here are some tips that may bring you back to a better condition. First, spend fifteen minutes doing your favourite activity, which will help you release tension. Second, carry a pen and paper with you when you’re on the go. Write down at least one thing that will make you feel proud of. Whenever you feel down, you can take a look at those notes to make yourself feel better and to gain confidence from it. Third, stop the negative thinking and focus on solving those problems. Instead of being so negative towards our life, why don’t we live happily and spend our time on something constructive?

I hope these suggestions will help you. Looking forward to hearing from you again.

Yours,

Li Hua

【解析】

本篇书面表达是一封书信。

第1步：根据提示可知，本篇为一封信件；假如你是李华，你的泰国朋友Saipan给你发来电子邮件说他最近学习状态不佳。请根据以下要点，给Saipan回复e-mail，给他介绍几个自我激励的方法。内容包括：1. 每天花十五分钟做自己喜欢的事；2. 随身携带纸和笔，每天至少记下一件让你感到骄傲的事；3. 停止负面思考，专注于解决学习问题。人称使用第二人称。时态应为一般现在时、一般将来时。

第2步：根据写作要求，确定关键词（组），如：be not in a good state of learning (学习状态不佳)，spend time doing sth.(花时间做某事)，release tension (减轻压力)，feel proud of (为……感到骄傲)，focus on (专注于)等。

第3步：根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。

第4步：连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰，保持整洁美观的卷面是非常重要的。